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Motorman is the only book ever given to me photocopied in full.
That's how hard to get it was, and how badly I wanted it.
David Ohle's legendary first novel was published some three decades
ago, in 1972, and it has since been out of print. Ohle himself, while
continuing to write and intermittently publish, has remained almost
completely unknown. So this earlier book, reprinted to coincide with
the release of his new novel, The Age of Sinatra, enters the
world as something fresh that is also the secret ancestor of the most
daring speculative fiction of our time.
Motorman tells the story of a hapless everyman named Moldenke,
who gets by in the gray areas of a world that's almost all gray areasa
science fiction-tinged world with two suns, a number of "government
moons," man-made humanoids called jellyheads, and mock wars where soldiers
volunteer for injury. Moldenke receives some menacing phone calls from
a man named Bunce, who claims to have tapes of everything everyone's
ever said about him. To escape from Bunce, he sets out to find his old
mentor, Dr. Burnheart.
Motorman is a quest narrative, of a sort. But you won't read
this book for the plot. It does have a narrative thread, but one composed
of snippets whose ends barely meet. The language, too, is not quite
English as we know it. Attributes and effects coagulate into strange
new objects"a building with structural moans"while familiar
objects are defamiliarized. Here's Moldenke taking notes on some birds:
"Rapid pecking followed by pauses." Got it. "Long, agile tongue coated
with a jellylike substance." OK . . . "When the tongue is retracted
it apparently wraps around the brain." What? That "apparently"
is the kicker here. This is a world that does factswe're not in
the realm of pure poesybut the rules have all been changed. Don't
expect Ohle to spell them out for you, either. Like very few other writersthe
Joseph McElroy of Plus, the Burroughs of Nova ExpressOhle
maintains a high level of indeterminacy in both his fictional world
and the language he uses to tell us about it. The result is disorienting,
vertiginous, thrilling: "Roquette pierced the water with his stick.
'Good,' he said. 'It's thick enough to walk on.'"
It helps to be light on your feet. Like one of the novel's geographic
oddities, the River Jelly, this book is only semi-solid. The tiny chapters
(sometimes no more than a few lines long) appear adrift in white space,
which starts to feel like a positive substance, something Ohle himself
might invent in his fiction: a sort of viscous fog from which unrecognizable
objects emerge. "He felt something without form, something edgeless,
rushing at him from the direction of eastern light." But before you
float away on this nebulous fare, Ohle gives you something solid: a
name. "Is that you, Bunce? Mr. Bunce?"
Bunce. A goofy name, a bounce with just a little of the air let out
of it. There is something clownish about Bunce and his threats. But
clowns are scary, and all is not right in this world of incessant,
pointless surveillance, petty bureaucratic meanness, decay and graft
and moral inertia. All is not right inside Moldenke, either, and that's
obvious not just from the arrhythmia in his four sheep hearts but from
the arrhythmia in the narrative, its stutter and lurch. By the end of
the book, we have lost track of time (easy to do in a world where six
"technical months" can pass in a single day), and neither we nor Moldenke
knows exactly what has been going on. Moldenke thinks he might have
let the goo out of a pair of jellyheads with a letter opener. Or was
it a screwdriver? It's dizzying but exhilarating for a reader to be
given so much room to play. A typical mobile might seem too pretty an
image to serve as a descriptive metaphor for a book by Ohle, but I have
a different image in mind. A friend from high school once called me
in tears: He was trying to make a mobile out of dead bugs but was having
trouble bringing them into balance. If he had succeeded, that mobile
might resemble this book: delicate and grotesque, tragic and hilarious,
precarious but perfectly balanced.
The Age of Sinatra picks up Moldenkelast seen heading
into the floodplains of the River Jellyafter one of the periodic
spells of Forgetting that sweep his world, erasing personal and social
history. He is still more done to than doing, but while Motorman
crepitates with secret agency, in The Age of Sinatra almost everyone
is someone's patsy, as befits a world that worships the half-remembered
Lee Harvey Oswald as the god Arvey. President Ratt keeps changing the
rules, so you can be indicted today for what was mandatory the day before,
and the hapless Moldenke, between arrests, finds himself involved in
a plot to unseat the leader. He also develops a disturbing growth on
his china flocculusthat ripens with the plot. Something's
going to give, but will anyone know the difference? Another Forgetting
is coming soon. But even on the Titanic (where the book opens),
you gotta eat. In this book, it's always time for lunch.
Do not read The Age of Sinatra while eating an egg-salad sandwich.
It is to your average novel what "Great, Green Gobs of Greasy, Grimy
Gopher Guts" is to "Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star." I'm told the manuscript's
future hung in the balance as its own publisher gagged over the "green
gland":
"He's showing his gland to us," Ophelia said excitedly. Within the
flocculus, the green gland passed from top to bottom, paused there a
beat or two, then extended its tip through the flocculus opening. Vink
grasped the gland with the long fingers of his three-digit hand, pulling
it out to its full extent. "Have a bite, folks."
It is a considerable achievement to conjure up an imaginary substance
so vividly that something strange happens under the reader's tongue.
An art critic once sniffed, "This painting seems to have been made for
the sense of smell." If a book can reek, rot, ooze, swell, burst, flake,
and fester, The Age of Sinatra is that book.
Why this obsession with the body afflicted? "I took a job one summer
working for the Louisiana State health department, not knowing what
it would be," Ohle said when he e-mailed me recently. "Turns out it
was testing shit. Hundreds of jars of it came in every day from all
over the state. It was my job to streak it onto agar in petri dishes
and incubate it. . . . Another thought is that my mother was dying of
colon cancer when I was a freshman in college. I spent a lot of time
with her and saw some very unpleasant things like oozing, bursting,
and stinking." A caution, then: Let's not forget that "great, green
gobs" can cohabitate with what is most heartfelt. Ohle's gross-outs
come with belly laughs, but also with a strained tenderness. The
Age of Sinatra, a litany of symptoms, is less like an ordinary novel
than it is like a patient history. But those might be the stories we
feel most keenly of all.
Motorman's scope is personal; The Age of Sinatra's is
scenic; it's a sort of travelogue of hell. In the new novel, Moldenke
is a roving eye rather than an actor, a decaying Candide whose suffering
is meant to instruct us in the ways of the world. Bunce, with his air
of a peculiarly private demon, has disappeared, to be replaced by the
multiple eyes of a panoptic society where judgment is swift and brutal
but transgression nonetheless rife. It's not a culture of control but
one where punishment produces desire and vice versa in a febrile cycle
of expenditures. Ohle's inferno shows some of Dante's gift for the grisly,
but not his implacable sense of just desserts. If you have a waiver,
the authorities will cheerfully punish the guy standing next to you.
Possibly it doesn't matter much. The perks of this world (having your
head cut off and sewn on backwardtrès chic!) are little
better than its punishments.
This dystopia is a tour de force of scabrous invention. It is also
uncomfortably real. As a kid I flipped through Science News and
got an unpleasant shock when I inadvertently put my finger on a close-up
of a spider's mandibles. Similarly, something about Ohle's prose closes
the gap between the representation of a disturbing thing and the thing
itself. You feel you ought to wash your hands after touching the page.
But if you think that wiping will remove the stain, consider this: Doing
time in the French Sewers (don't ask), Moldenke learns that they supply
the bakery where edible paper"for money, for waivers, for wiping,
for books"is made. Shit is books, books are food, food is shit.
The conclusion? We're in it. Deep.
Shelley Jackson's collection of stories The Melancholy
of Anatomy was published in 2002 by Anchor Books.
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